I picked the woods because I was thinking about going hunting.
And my characters were me and my friend and my brother.
Friday, June 18, 2021
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Hey Thomas !,
ReplyDeleteI'm Rose from Owairaka School I really love how you did mythical creatures and you did it how you wanted to.Maybe you could of check your spelling or add more detail but you don't have to anyways love your blog .
BYE!
Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School
ReplyDeleteI really like that you started with one day on a cold night
I learnt that made the background black and the words blue
Maybe you could say why you were out hunting and for what reason.
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Mā te wā
Michael