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Friday, July 2, 2021
My Writing
I picked the diving picture because it look cool in the water.
Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School I really like that you said you were rich and that you found an old ship. I learnt that if you go diving and you find an old you might find a treasure chest. Maybe you could check your spelling next time Please visit my blog here
Kia ora Thomas, I am Audrey from Saint puis x school and I am a year 6 I like the photo you add and it look great but could you add more writing and to check your spelling and to work on your tite but anyways have a great day.
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Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School
ReplyDeleteI really like that you said you were rich and that you found an old ship.
I learnt that if you go diving and you find an old you might find a treasure chest.
Maybe you could check your spelling next time
Please visit my blog here
Mā te wā
Michael
Kia ora Thomas,
ReplyDeleteI am Audrey from Saint puis x school and I am a year 6 I like the photo you add and it look great but could you add more writing and to check your spelling and to work on your tite but anyways have a great day.
thx
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