Friday, July 2, 2021

My Writing

 I picked the diving picture because it look cool in the water.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School
    I really like that you said you were rich and that you found an old ship.
    I learnt that if you go diving and you find an old you might find a treasure chest.
    Maybe you could check your spelling next time
    Please visit my blog here

    Mā te wā
    Michael

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  2. Kia ora Thomas,
    I am Audrey from Saint puis x school and I am a year 6 I like the photo you add and it look great but could you add more writing and to check your spelling and to work on your tite but anyways have a great day.

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